Okeey, not a bad effort at all, but you need better tools man, the concept is good, but the sound is all wrong, did you work this out with a simple four track and fruity loops, cause it sounds like it. I work with Cubase and there's a lot more you can pull out of it. I allready posted a few songs on WZL but allready deleted them. Cubase isn't easy to work with, find a manual or a course and you'll get the hang of it. Check out a few of my 'art'. http://users.telenet.be/calafalas
Im working with Fruity Loops (hey thats not bad at all , its matter of taste said dog when he licked own balls...), Reason 3.0 and Acid 3.0. I´ve tried Cubase running some vst instruments and stuff. but that was not for me Im studying reason now. But cubase and reason rewired + loats of vst instruments and effects would be good complination thanks for comment. i will listen your track as soon i get home from work
